Shark of the Month October 13
Join Date: Nov 2011
Location: Was northern Maine, now gulf coast of Florida
Very nice effort. My personal taste would be towards cutting the fireworks to a minute or less and use all that additional time for much more time spent on the bikes, especially the show bikes, plus consider some time spent showing and describing some key vendors "new" products.
I say that not knowing what your specific goal was here for a finished product. As is, it's comes off more like a Reno area Chamber of Commerce video - very nice but pretty general.
“Life should not be a journey to the grave with the intention of arriving safely in a pretty and well-preserved body, but rather to skid in broadside in a cloud of smoke, thoroughly used up, totally worn out, and loudly proclaiming “Wow! What a Ride!” - HST